Post by I AM the Way on Aug 5, 2011 14:15:39 GMT -6
My reply re-posted from here: cultofcthulhu.wall.fm/forum/topic/255
In one of the fiction writing books that I've been reading, it discusses "the hook" Shawn mentioned. Although, this book goes one further. Every section, plot point, chapter, paragraph, or even sentence would benefit from including "micro-tension". Micro-tension is a tiny bit of conflict under the surface.
Micro-tension is different than your central conflict. Your story might be about rescuing a princess but your opening should also include a modicum of conflict. Otherwise, the reader might not keep reading. How about...
He wanted to read her diary, but chose not to.
See what happened there? The person (possibly our protagonist) brings drama to the very first line by revealing the tension between wanting to read her diary and choosing to go against his desire. Instinctively, we (the readers) want to know why. Conflict created demands conflict resolved. A reader will keep reading in order to resolve the conflict (i.e. find out what happened).
That lesson right there was worth the $15 or whatever I paid for the book.
Now you try! Or, for instructional purposes, dig out one of your favorite novels or short stories, sift through it, and post a quote exemplifying micro-tension.
VS
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