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Post by cortwilliams on Sept 1, 2012 10:32:38 GMT -6
Seed of the Goat Angel
Meteoric seed raining from the heavens Striking softly on Her rich dark mother soil Burying dark glittering treasure Beneath mounds of heaving restless earth
In the hallowed darkened chamber Writhing fury abides Serpentine bloom dreaming darkly Of stony spires stabbing upwards
Hail Satanis! Cort
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Post by Zirna'ritee-sigth on Sept 1, 2012 11:49:16 GMT -6
Not a bad rhythm of words that spill forth, with a nice sort of texture.
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Post by cortwilliams on Sept 6, 2012 17:22:09 GMT -6
Thanks for the feedback Zirna'ritee-sigth!
Hail Satanis! Cort
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