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Haiku
Feb 6, 2012 15:45:54 GMT -6
Post by marth3456 on Feb 6, 2012 15:45:54 GMT -6
^^ I personally love Haiku's. Short sweet but yet can hold so much depth. To bad people want the long poem these days. Here's one i made a while back.
Spider on the web. Twirling, Twirling in its world. Ambush for the fool.
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Haiku
Feb 7, 2012 16:25:58 GMT -6
Post by Kai'zen on Feb 7, 2012 16:25:58 GMT -6
i like the way that you always want them to rhyme, but the structure is awkward and they don't, it feels unsettling XD
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Haiku
Feb 8, 2012 6:26:44 GMT -6
Post by marth3456 on Feb 8, 2012 6:26:44 GMT -6
xD yeah they feel like no other poem.
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Haiku
Mar 7, 2012 20:10:42 GMT -6
Post by patience on Mar 7, 2012 20:10:42 GMT -6
i like it. peace
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Haiku
Mar 7, 2012 21:36:13 GMT -6
Post by patience on Mar 7, 2012 21:36:13 GMT -6
how could i make this more haiku? ~
Cephalopoda drifts over ammonite graves. change glints the encased
~ I don't know, because I stink at following rules. peace
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Haiku
Mar 8, 2012 10:27:26 GMT -6
Post by I AM the Way on Mar 8, 2012 10:27:26 GMT -6
I don't think Haiku can be more Haiku than what it already is. If it follows the rules and speaks to you, then it is Haiku.
That being said, I'm not sure what "ammonite graves" are or what is encased, unless it is Dread Cthulhu himself. Not satisfied with a piece of work? Then you have three choices: 1) give up. 2) re-work what you created. 3) create something entirely new.
Awake!
VS
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Haiku
Mar 8, 2012 15:03:04 GMT -6
Post by patience on Mar 8, 2012 15:03:04 GMT -6
I don't think Haiku can be more Haiku than what it already is. If it follows the rules and speaks to you, then it is Haiku.
That being said, I'm not sure what "ammonite graves" are or what is encased, unless it is Dread Cthulhu himself. Not satisfied with a piece of work? Then you have three choices: 1) give up. 2) re-work what you created. 3) create something entirely new.
Awake!
VS
What I saw in my mind when coming up with something that would fit within the guide lines was: a somewhat shallow section of the ocean covered in remnants of these living creature's ancestors, the ammonite. I saw them shimmering and I also saw the creatures shimmering... and colors of the shimmer changed as the water moved, or as the living creatures' mood changed, apparently they use their skin to communicate. I think 'encased' is the past....and what is fluid is the moment. Don't worry. Be happy. Make efforts.
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Haiku
Mar 14, 2012 7:22:56 GMT -6
Post by marth3456 on Mar 14, 2012 7:22:56 GMT -6
Haiku follows the structure of 5,7,5 syllables. First line is 5 syllables and so on and so on. However in the spirit of chaos you can always change that and make something unique. Haiku itself could have been that inspired chaos to break away from the traditional poems.
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Haiku
Mar 16, 2012 14:19:30 GMT -6
Post by I AM the Way on Mar 16, 2012 14:19:30 GMT -6
Haiku follows the structure of 5,7,5 syllables. First line is 5 syllables and so on and so on. However in the spirit of chaos you can always change that and make something unique. Haiku itself could have been that inspired chaos to break away from the traditional poems. Self-imposed structure is like conscious or intentional suffering, emanating from our own will. But if someone wanted to create a different structure for their poetry, then that form would be just as valid as Haiku's familiar 5/7/5 pattern.
By His loathsome tentacles,
VS
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Haiku
Apr 4, 2012 11:45:35 GMT -6
Post by wren on Apr 4, 2012 11:45:35 GMT -6
Had a freaky-ass dream last night and had to write a Haiku about it. Out of all types of poetry, Haiku has to be my favorite. Simple, but immense at the same time. Screaming Death dealer Fear destroys my peaceful sleep Pounding on the walls Anyone up for a Haiku poetry slam? Ia Ia Cthulhu fahgtn!
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Haiku
Apr 6, 2012 9:22:24 GMT -6
Post by marth3456 on Apr 6, 2012 9:22:24 GMT -6
Haha love that idea thinking in millitary terms most poem are bombs but Haikus are grenades xD I have a weird mind at times Swift times are coming Changes large changes are here Be ready or be left
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